Kudos to Monica Mujumdar Dixit for writing such a novel with contemporary background. - Characters are lively and start being you - Situations are quite realistic and retain suspense - Amolika is developed finely - Sequences maintained nicely - Introduction of side characters in suitable with the qualities - Last chapters with Political/criminal background are nicely intensified, without being too elaborate - Raehan needs a bit polishing - Amolika’s UK stay, prior to assignment, could have been detailed to express her personality. - Last chapters become predictable - Being contemporary, use of technology like Mobiles/conversations, TV etc should have been more - Avoid some repetitions when once narrates what happened in previous pages. This should be handled wisely
It’s well narrated story Mona. Congratulations and looking forward to next!!