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Needs a lot of work4 May 2014
- Published on Amazon.com
Format: Kindle Edition
I was gifted of copy.
This is the sequel to Call Sign: Storm Warning. I enjoyed the first enough to read the second one.
The main story line is a company run by Bill Winchester, EPSI. He is attempting to help the current president and staff rebuild the corruption they identified in the first one. Their findings would result in a global hunt for the man who wanted to be “King of the world,” Sher Lavassaney. He is enraged his son, Vice-President of the U.S., was flushed out and killed in the first book. He now plans on justifying the loss. With that plot in mind, this should have been a hard hitting story. Nope. Way too many unnecessary characters, weapon descriptions and juvenile dialogue. It reads more like a YA book than an adult thriller.
Please send this to an editor who will provide honest feedback and suggestions.